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PostSubject: Ok, since I couldn't think of title...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:48 pm

I did a good majority of the script, which I personally think looks like crap but it holds a lot of stuff to film, mostly pure randomness, yay

For now I'll just put down the main character cast

.sickling.- yourself, yes we call you sickling in the movie
A.T.C.- Me
Kudo- Not me (whoa wtf?!) [see Narrator]
Deodar- Deodardave+ Pokemon Trainer
Drag4ndz- Drag4ndz + Ness
Dark A.T.C.- Me, but relax, he dies so as to avoid pure camera hogging
Narrator- to be determined...oddly enough, the script is so oddly written, it CAN'T be one of us...mabye I'll get emmie or alexa to say something (with the default microphone on the laptop and an encoder, it could be ANYONE Twisted Evil ) if it were one of us, it seem like we were talking to ourselves

Pure throwaway characters

Cram- Occasional random guy, totally optional character whose ONLY purpose is to get hit by collateral damage, the Kenny of this movie so to speak
Disease trio- consists of Aletheia, Savato, and AIDS, I'm debating whether to have them walk away or get killed by a scapel, if killed with a scapel we need a throwaway Dr. Stiles character
Dr. Stiles- see above
Enrichment Center (mabye, I could redo the script to remove this but w/e)- General Gloria (yes it's SUPPOSED to be a retarded name)
Persona 3 Main Character- mabye a 5 second scene

Plot: A.T.C., Drag4ndz, and Deodardave are playing an online match with Kudo on the other end (to conviently not be on screen), A.T.C. wins, and then an 'unlock reality' option appears on the screen, slow-mo pressing the A button, earthquake, everyone dissappears

A.T.C. finds himself outside with a wooden master sword, he picks it up and goes inside, Drag4ndz is found inside dressed up as Ness singing the 8 melodies (Mother 1/Earthbound Zero refrence) A.T.C. finds it useless to start a conversation, so he leaves to find his evil clone...who runs away and sends Gloria to fight in his place, while failing level 2 at tetris

Gloria pulls out P3 Mc's evoker which is totally useless as a bluff and explains how it can't really be used, realizing she told the secret to her bluff, she drops the evoker and runs away, A.T.C. attempts to question her but it is too late, and he finds Deodardave dressed up as a pokemon trainer right behind him...stalkerish almost (inside joke intended) Deodardave's Metapod uses explosion and faints on the spot while Deodardave challenges A.T.C. to a pokemon battle, he then gives half of his money and blacks out, while A.T.C. attempts to piece together wtf just happened, Drag4ndz shows up saying A.T.C. is standing in his "My Santuary location", as a joke A.T.C. goes on quoting from earthbound what is said before a My Santuary battle, and thus an Earthbound RPG battle is started, They fight as the Narrator tells them exactly to do, talk about scripted, i.e. "Ness bashed into the enemy" Ness: *about to eat a banana* what?! ok fine *bashes instead* and then Drag4ndz loses, leaving behind a note from Kudo, Kudo says that everyone has pretty much been turned into what they were using during the smash match, and to not even go TRY to save him, since something disasterous has apparantly happened on Kudo's side (if it helps, Kudo uses Kirby in the smash match) A.T.C. finishes the note and decides to take a nap, then it switches over to sickling, who has had absolutly no direct connection to any of the characters. Sickling just starts off walking around and ends up finding a Wooden Sasuke Katana on the ground...Dark ATC was clumsy and dropped it, so he picks it up and finds the disease trio who eventually leave due to certain technicalities, sickling continues and runs into Dark ATC, sickling kills Dark ATC after realizing Dark ATC's evil plans...which were pretty straightforward 'kill thy good twin'. Then an explosion is heard (Metapod's explosion to be percise), sickling runs to see what it was, but in the process runs into ATC instead, they end up fighting because the script tells them too, meanwhile, Drag4ndz and Deodardave have awoke and end up fighting each other in an uberscrewedup RPG fight, Deodardave eventually wins when his Magikarp uses Judgement

Meanwhile, A.T.C. and sickling attempt to break the 5th wall and pull a psycho mantis on the viewers "you are the bored type, the one who likes to watch random youtube videos to pass the time..." etc. then they pull the epic stanza of "run, split second slash, now let's see who wins after the delay" it fails to work as none of them fall after the delay, they try again, as cram walks by, both slice cram and hope someone falls this time...it doesn't work and Cram falls to the floor in pain

A.T.C. then pulls a perona pose with the evoker, when it fails, he throws the evoker away only to hit the walking away cram (relax Cram, we can just have you say Ow! off screen or something)

Then the mini credits roll, with not much on them, people in the video dispute what kind of ending was that while giving off obvious plot loopholes, such as, there was never an explanation of Dark A.T.C. and where did Gloria run off too? Eventually they decided on stabbing a picture of Marx, while admitting that this act is excessively boring and truely retarded, and dislike the Script writter Kudo for forcing them to do all of this crap for no apparant reason except boredom

The End

FACT: I have just lost 75% of your intrest to do this project/film
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PostSubject: Re: Ok, since I couldn't think of title...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:59 pm

Very Happy
It looks great!
But do you have the actual dialogue ready yet?

Possible Name?
The League of Awesomeness

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PostSubject: Re: Ok, since I couldn't think of title...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:44 pm

.sickling. wrote:
Very Happy
It looks great!
But do you have the actual dialogue ready yet?

Possible Name?
The League of Awesomeness


yeah I have all of the actual dialogue, but that's 14 pages long (after taking away credits and startup)

double spaced, so you can cut that to 7 mabye, one act of pure randomness not mentioned above (I shall attempt to make a SHOOP DA WHOOP contemplation shweet) etc. which ends with Drag4ndz and Deodardave meeting...I have my times way off, w/e, it'll work for the actual movie
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PostSubject: Re: Ok, since I couldn't think of title...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 11:25 pm

Kudo wrote:
.sickling. wrote:
Very Happy
It looks great!
But do you have the actual dialogue ready yet?

Possible Name?
The League of Awesomeness


yeah I have all of the actual dialogue, but that's 14 pages long (after taking away credits and startup)

double spaced, so you can cut that to 7 mabye, one act of pure randomness not mentioned above (I shall attempt to make a SHOOP DA WHOOP contemplation shweet) etc. which ends with Drag4ndz and Deodardave meeting...I have my times way off, w/e, it'll work for the actual movie


One thing to note:
SHOOP DA WOOPS are really hard to make funny unless you have authentic effects. If you don't have that distinctive shiny blue laser, the BLAAGGH sound effect, and the shaking screen then don't try and make it, it's just not funny.

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PostSubject: Re: Ok, since I couldn't think of title...   Mon Nov 10, 2008 12:33 pm

.sickling. wrote:
Kudo wrote:
.sickling. wrote:
Very Happy
It looks great!
But do you have the actual dialogue ready yet?

Possible Name?
The League of Awesomeness


yeah I have all of the actual dialogue, but that's 14 pages long (after taking away credits and startup)

double spaced, so you can cut that to 7 mabye, one act of pure randomness not mentioned above (I shall attempt to make a SHOOP DA WHOOP contemplation shweet) etc. which ends with Drag4ndz and Deodardave meeting...I have my times way off, w/e, it'll work for the actual movie


One thing to note:
SHOOP DA WOOPS are really hard to make funny unless you have authentic effects. If you don't have that distinctive shiny blue laser, the BLAAGGH sound effect, and the shaking screen then don't try and make it, it's just not funny.


whoever said were FILMING a SHOOP DA WHOOP to edit, I'm getting already done SHOOP DA WHOOP clips and adding in the sound (so yes, that or I might just erase it entirely, either way...)
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