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PostSubject: Story clarifications   Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:22 pm

genre: Action RPG
time line: Parallel history

The main branch off of our history is during the times of the black plague (which was apparently the work of shades). Thanks to that thief that opened the book, humans have gained the ability to use arcane spells and were thus able to defeat the black plague. (Like it so far?) Because of this, each next generation has a better grip on magic and therefore can significantly harm the previous generations. Thanks to this fact, magic jamming items such as bracelets, necklaces, anklets, earrings, ribbons are given to them at a young age. when a child reaches the age of 16, they have all magic jamming items removed and kicked out of the house. That is where the main character finds himself. In an academy where all the students have their new, unadulterated powers and the same cruelty that only a child knows.

(There it is! All rough at what not. .sickling. feel free to point out any inconsistencies and everybody else can contribute too.)

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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:37 pm

Oooh, I like it. Except, change the black plague to the "black evil" (Shades). It would be hard to eradicate disease by magic.

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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:17 am

.sickling. wrote:
Oooh, I like it. Except, change the black plague to the "black evil" (Shades). It would be hard to eradicate disease by magic.



you are clearly forgetting FFVII Advent Children


As for my opinion on the story, it seems pretty good, but something is...I don't know, something to me just doesn't seem right, but I doubt it's anything important
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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Tue Apr 14, 2009 10:33 am

NO! we must find the problem!

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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:35 pm

.sickling. wrote:
Oooh, I like it. Except, change the black plague to the "black evil" (Shades). It would be hard to eradicate disease by magic.

RACIST!

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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:45 pm

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.sickling. wrote:
Oooh, I like it. Except, change the black plague to the "black evil" (Shades). It would be hard to eradicate disease by magic.

RACIST!


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Ahem, anyway, it doesn't have to be "Black Evil," a better name would be "Dark Evil."

And by the way, Shades are the manifestations. Dusk is the name of the place of where they come from.

Speaking of evil,

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PostSubject: Re: Story clarifications   Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:52 pm

that sounds like how they changed 'black magician' (original japanese) to 'dark magician'(english version)

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